Yesterday Me and the group was given our feedback for the rough cut version for the webisode and most of it was posative. These positive comments are listed below:
Positive:
$ Alisons speech in the woods was well thought of, created and performed.
$ The continuity editing is very good, for example, where Alison is walking through reception. Many angles of vision of Alison walking.
$ Where Alison is transformed into a vampire in the woods between the two trees with her arms up, the lighting is very good and bright as if she did travel in time.
Negative:
$ The sound in the corridor when Alison is walking does not match the sound in the different shot angles.
$ Not any soundtrack, Most of the time we hear Alison walking.
$ The video is not very clear - the storyline/plot is not presented well as people do not know what is happening and what it is really about.
(All feedback has been expanded on)
People thought that the costume was fantastic that Alison was wearing when a vampire. I thought it was really good with the character and the characters storyline, but the flower headband that she was wearing did not look right as she is meant to be a killer vampire.
I am very pleased with the feedback and as a group we will improve on our rough cut and work on thw negative feedback. Our main aim will be to make the story line clearer, and hopeful add in some effects.
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