The Revenge Of Jessica Hill Feedback From Steve Thorne

Tuesday 12th October 2010

At times the audio mixing is working well, good use of L-shaped audio edits. I think the opening sequence with the audio of the boot footsteps needs to carry on a bit into the next shot with the lockers. They are very loud and suddenly cut when we get to the next scene. I'm looking forward to hearing the piano soundtrack when it's added. Interesting pinhole camera effect on the opening titles, but i think the titles are bit too simplistic and need to reflect your vision of the film's style and feel more.

The early college walking shots change direction (left to right, then right to left and back again etc.) You might want to reconsider this and keep Ali walking mid shots, no use of close ups on the two characters. When James is searching for Ali, maybe we should see his concern? Close up on the vampire bite?

Fantastic costume, but i would like to see a change in atmosphere in the woods as Ali changes into the dressed lady. Have you tried any darkness/nighttime effects? Overall a clear episode, next stage is to add the atmosphere to the piece.